by Ben
One Saturday afternoon Ted and his friends Fred, Ed, and Ned went to Yellowstone State Park for a bike ride. Ted did not know that the brakes didn’t work on his bike! So when there was a river at the bottom of a hill the trail curved to go next to the river and you had to slow down going around the curve but Ted did not have brakes so he flew down the hill right into the river! Ted’s friends jumped into the river to get him. The current was very strong. It began to carry them away but there was a big rock in the water. All four kids got on the rock. “That was really close,” Ed said. “I know,” Ned said. “Next time I will make sure the brakes work,” Ted said. Fred had a waterproof cell phone so he called Ted’s Mom and Dad and soon they were back with a very long board and put it out into the middle of the river and put it on the rock. The four kids walked across the board and onto land. On the way home the kids told all about their adventure.
The End.
Very good story. Keep up the excellent work.
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